Feedback from Pitch

We done a class pitch and here is the results we got back.

Rating:
One Star 3 out of 5
Two Stars 2 out of 5

Elements that work:

• Ideology 
• Record label
• Demographics
• Specific target audience and aim
• Goes out to a wide audience

Things that need developing: 

• Band members
• Costume
• Casting 
• Animatic
• Need performance 

Things that don't work: 

• The video concept 
• Location